Thursday, July 9, 2009

Definition of Love

I knew it was just a dream!!!

I could see a sign of resentment in her eyes. Her long silence was an enigma for me, which was quashing my every attempt to thank her for giving me one more opportunity to see the most vigilant eyes of the world. Her ruthlessness dismantled me, giving an alarm of a complete detonation and I was praying that my thoughts are on wrong direction but I knew her any such emotion can never be frivolous even to a small extent. Finally my patience relinquished-“Angel, air is dying to enjoy sweetness of your every word. Let it come out of feeling of being a criminal.”

“I am afraid; today my epithet would render only disappointment in the environment.” I was trying to find different words in reverberation but now the annihilation was conspicuous for me.

“Angel, what happened?” I was praying that it was just a joke but her smoldering eyes were destroying my every hope.

“I can’t believe that you defined love as far from a single ripple of selflessness, worship for prosperity of…..”

I wish I could amaze at her prowess to use words so effectively and economically but they were only to serve their only purpose and were enough to do my complete autopsy. The annoyance in her eyes had capitulated and had taken form of tears and I didn’t have courage to even look into them.

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HELP DESK :

resentment: displease
enigma: piece of surprise
quashing: destroying
ruthlessness: having no pity
dismantled: broke into pieces
detonation: explosion
frivolous: lacking serious purpose
relinquished: gave up
epithet: words
reverberation: echo
annihilation : complete destruction
conspicuous: noticeable
smoldering: with anger
capitulate: give up
autopsy: postmortem

6 comments:

  1. I am a casual writer so might be i not have that much vocab like u or otherwise u r having very good vocab with my standard. :P so i found it difficult to fully grasp without a dictionary in my hand .

    This is a fantastic article. You are as complicated in English like you be in Hindi to be well understood. But emotions are great and touching.

    Cheers,

    Holy~Devil

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  2. arey.. kuch samajh main nai aya...
    i read it. thrice to be able to post a comment..
    neverthless great use.. of words.. ( even technical ones in between :P)
    the idea.. is simple.. yet.. the writing gives it a new and different dimension...
    A good one.. for the first blog..
    keep going !

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  3. kuch nai chamka
    pata nai kya likha hai
    kyon likha hai
    kis se pooch kar likha hai

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  4. abe yeh kya ho gaya tereko,
    aisi behki behki baatein karne laga hai,
    woh bhi english me :O

    ek baat bata ?? tune hi likha hai na :P

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  5. i love it...
    reminds me of some recent happenings...
    agar kabhi time mile toh bataunga...
    waise kaun thi woh ???

    p.s. - kahaan se chhaapi hai :P (HEHEHE)

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  6. Thanks Rajarshi & SPM !!!
    kisi ko to samajh aaya :)

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